Mid week teaser….

A little something from the coming chapter to drive you nuts….


“…With the distance between us I notice the blood, my hand flying to my chest, fingers coated as I fumble to feel for an injury but finding none.

Oh no! Unwelcome realisation punches through the scatter of my thoughts: Christian! I watch in horror as the red bloom on his shirt grows at an alarming rate, the white nearly entirely overtaken by the spill of his precious life.

Taylor scoops me up. Half dragging, half carrying me while my feet slip and slide; failing to get a good grip on the shiny floor, now slippery with its scarlet trail…”

38 thoughts on “Mid week teaser….

  1. Omg I can’t wait!!!!


  2. Mercia says:

    Oh! I thought the Taylor’s were on vacation? Can’t wait for #30.
    You always leave us with something to think about.
    Thank you Monique


    • Monique Lain says:

      The one shot is +\-two months after this current story, this is for chapter 30, they have just arrived back from honeymoon…;)


      • Mercia says:

        Of course! Too many fireworks. They can do your head in. I know how Taylor feels about the.
        I would have thought the milk glass was a high security risk? One way glass would have been better.
        I hope they catch the culprits!
        How you manage to keep up with, A and C I don’t know. It takes a very special lady!


  3. Amy says:

    Omg…way to leave us hanging..I’m freaking out here


  4. CJ says:

    Oh Lord! The drama finally arrives, full force. Can’t wait for the new chapter. Happy New Year, Monique!


  5. Liz ( Atterbury) says:

    Monique, Happy New Year! And Thanks to your outstanding one shot, I survived the holidays with a minimum of oxygen treatments, by knowing our favorite couple made it thru this horrific cliffhanger you left us with! Thank you again for the infusion that fuels our desires to see the results of this tragedy! Hope you had a lovely holiday, got a little rest at least from the keyboard. Laters! And Love You! Liz (say that fast 3 times:) )


  6. caroline miller says:

    what a tease.. can’t wait for ch.30… some imagination,keep up the excellent work..x :):):)


  7. JustinHartley4Fifty says:

    Wahhhhh😢😢😢 I think I’m going to be sick. I want to read about Christmas Day boxing and kinky fuckery again. Happy place happy place. Poor Christian, poor Ana, poor Chris, and most of all poor ME!


  8. Which of your stories is this teaser for?


  9. Katherine says:

    I cannot wait to read this!
    Christian is injured obviously but who is doing it???
    I hope you enjoyed your time out xx


  10. ash says:

    OMG!!!!cant wait for chapter30


  11. Peg says:

    I wish I didn’t read the teaser. It wasn’t enough and now I am famished. My CSI brain has kicked up with who, how, what, where and why. Who…a few in mind
    What … did Chris see that made him drop for cover
    How..sharp shooter from helicopter, drone
    Where… was Taylor, security, does Chris stay in his room


  12. mrsdamon says:

    oh noooooo….what happened to our beloved Fifty? Monique, you do drive us nuts….my heart in my throat…uh uh Friday please come faster, anything else can wait but your update!!!!!


  13. Erica says:

    OMG Monique, that is one hell of a teaser! I can’t wait, but I hope Christian isn’t hurt too bad….& I hope we are getting closer to finding out who is causing this turmoil! So anxious, thanks for giving me something to look forward to!


  14. Valerie says:

    Nice one Monique! I have a few thoughts in my head on who it could be…and I hope it’s not my main suspect! I’ll tell you who jumped to my mind at another time. For now, it’s my little secret…I sure hope I’m wrong 🙂


  15. Andrea says:

    I shouldn’t have read this teaser. I just want more!!!!!!!! OMGosh CG has to be OK!!!!!! Where is Chris? Who is getting him to safety? I will be sitting on pins & needles until I get the full chapter on Friday!!!!

    Great work!


  16. Dawn says:

    Please Kellen Lutz is my dream Christian hope directors are looking at him!!!


  17. twinkie55 says:

    I am finished! What a teaser. Hope you had a great relaxing time with your family. It is too hot in South Africa and I stay up late to catch your updates and teasers, but seriously I am starved and anxiously waiting for the weekly reality show of the Greys. It’s much better than that other TV show, the Kardashians.


  18. tracy says:

    Is it Friday yet??? Jeez!!! Can’t wait!!!


  19. Julie says:

    Oh no, Christian. And what about Chris – oh can’t wait for tomorrow.
    I’m looking very much forward to reading how he handles being hurt and out of control, having Ana taking care of him for a change.


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