Quickie Meander – Short Story

wet shirt

The picture that inspired the story…

That dark look has been on his face all week. I thought that a session with Bastille would help him relax but by the stomp and growl routine behind me, apparently not. I smile through the toothpaste bubbles rimming my mouth as I watch him in the mirror. Even bad tempered he’s stunning. I love the way his white tank is clinging to him, the patches of sweat hinting at the definition I know is beneath.

Muttering to himself he disposes of his running shoes and sweatpants in a single motion. With his back to me I spit and rinse quickly, my hungry gaze never once leaving the taut flexing of his outrageously hot ass. I feel like sinking my teeth into it.

It’s been a whole week for us, seven days of zero sex, nothing, nada, zilch! Not because we don’t want to but because my dear husband has been working like a dog. Some deal going south has sent him across the country and away from our bed. To call me frustrated would be an understatement but I’ve never been in this particular predicament with him before. Do I pounce or give him space?

Turning he sees me as if he didn’t even realise I was there, “Hey baby. You gonna’ shower?”

Biting my lip I make a decision, if Bastille didn’t do it for him maybe I can. “I am Mr Grey, why don’t you join me?” I drop my robe to the floor and step out of the fluffy pool at my feet. Flicking back my hair, I fist my waist. My whole body but especially my eyes issue a flash of desire that I’m hoping he won’t, can’t ignore.

His hands freeze midway up his abs on their way to pulling off his tank. I purr as I watch that black look turn to mercury, fluid and alive with sudden possibility. He drags in a breath as he scans the length of creamy, naked flesh I have on proud display, devouring every inch with his eyes.

His hands fall away from his shirt, uninterested in ridding him of it as he moves toward me. “I’ve been neglecting you baby, it’s been crazy. Seeing you like this,” he looks down, again taking his time to really take me in, “I have no idea how I managed that oversight.”

Already my pulse is spiking in anticipation, my sex throbbing in answer. “You’ll just have to make it up to me.” I tilt my head to the side, wearing only a playful coquettish smile to tease him.

He grins, the naughtiest, filthiest grin I’ve ever seen. “I intend to do just that Mrs Grey, do you have any specific requests?”

His words wash over me, that together with the blatant and deliberate lust he uses to enunciate them is lighting an explosive fire in my veins, a sinuous, slow, stoking fire. “I. Want. You. To. Fuck. Me. – Hard.”

I see him swallow, his watch drilling into me with a new intensity and maybe a little hesitation. His body is not hesitant, I think as I admire the huge poke of his already swollen erection. Only his mind. Without thinking too hard I decide to take the decision out of his hands. With a bold and forceful fist I clutch a handful of his tee, dragging him into the shower with me. A second later the warm water drenches us and Christian’s white tank is plastered to him like paint.

For the moment he seems to be going along with my dominant Ana act, simply watching me with an ever evolving gaze. Eagerly I grab my cue to take what I want. I let my flat palms slip down his body, loving the way they move over the ridges and valleys that makes up his prized physique.

Dropping to my knees I tease his soaking shirt off his rigid length, I watch him through my lashes wondering if he’ll stop me. When I flick my tongue over the very tip I’m rewarded with not only a hiss but a flicker of his lids and a single hand steadying himself against the glass.

“Fuck!” his jolting reaction is all I need to take him in. Hollowing my cheeks I do away with all gentleness and suck as if my life depends on it. I Work my hot, wet mouth along his hardness with the same speed I’ve seen him use on himself, the forceful hand gripping my hair tells me I’m giving him exactly what he needs.

Just as I get into my stride he yanks himself out of my mouth and hustles me up by the arm. Just like an experienced cop he has me turned and flat against the tiles before I know what’s happening. That hand is in my hair again, gripping a fistful at the nape of my neck; the other has my wrists pinned above my head.

I feel the heat of him behind me, my breasts pushed against the slippery wall. He brings his lips to my ear, “I hope you didn’t think you were in charge Mrs Grey. I say when, I say how.” There’s an edge in his voice, an undeniable dominant tone that calls to everything that is woman inside me. In spite of the hot water I shiver with a delicious thrill that darts straight into my sex.

He licks my cheek with the flat of his tongue, from my jaw to my temple in a move that appears impossibly possessive and assertive at once. Shit that’s hot. I whimper, a pathetic sound that speaks of what little willpower I have to prolong this game. I want him inside me – now.

In an obvious effort to get my way I rub my wet backside against the thick column pressing into me. “Tell me again Anastasia. What do you want?” I hear the sinful grin in his words as he grinds right back.

“Please sir, fuck me.” If my statement wasn’t laced with such heavy desire it would sound like a desperate whine.

He kicks my legs apart and gives me another slow lick along my cheek before he latches onto the softest part to give me a gentle bite. “You’ve got it baby.” He bends his knees, releasing my hair only long enough to pull back my hips. With a sharp, sure stab he impales me with the whole length of him, rocking into me with a heavenly force.

The heady groan that growls out of his chest captures me completely, my restraint hanging by a rapidly fraying thread. His hips are relentless, pumping into me like iron pistons. In no time I start that quivering clench around him, increasing the dragging friction between us.

He bites into my shoulder as his grip in my hair and on my wrists tighten with the gathering strain of his release. “Now baby!” He yells but I couldn’t hold it even if I wanted too. Throwing my head back I shout his name, a prayer, a creed – I don’t know. I’m just grateful for the gift.

The end

Thank you for spending your time reading my stories! I love hearing your thoughts. Please be kind and share them.

Also, if you enjoyed the Crossfire series by Sylvia Day, check out my two Crossfire short stories:

Crossfire Meander – Reflected In You Fan Fiction


Gideon Meander – Short Story Fan Fiction

99 thoughts on “Quickie Meander – Short Story

  1. Damn that was hot. Great job….


  2. And I as well! Loved this delightful and unexpected amazing treat! Oh that was hot! It was quick and very effective, sometimes quick and hard is just the ticket. Oh darling you are the best! You always make my day 😉


  3. Gunchsmom says:

    Wow…suddenly got very warm in here! Monique, you never disappoint!


  4. skinsavant says:

    ❤ love this chapter! you. are. brilliant!


  5. Gwen says:

    You devil you…… Yum!


  6. Camilla says:

    This was fantastic 🙂 Just what I needed 🙂
    As always, your writing is fantastic 🙂
    Thank you for this fantastic surprise, it was HOT 🙂


  7. karen (kaz) says:

    very nice to wake up to !


  8. Katherine says:

    Hot Hot Hot!
    You are spoiling us – we will expect this every week
    Fabulous – loved it


  9. Davina Knowles says:

    Smoking hot!!! Love it 🙂


  10. Barb says:

    Hot and steamy!!! Loved it… and love these one-shots you surprise us with. Anymore on the way?


  11. anan8808 says:

    That was hot hot hot. Thanks I needed that.


  12. Mrs. G says:

    A little morning quickie! Just what I needed! Thanks for the surprise! Happy C & A Day!


  13. Sharon says:

    Yummy! Thank you for giving us more!!! I’m awake now!!


  14. Blondegirl3 says:

    I need to have my hubby read this to draw him a distinct picture….. Hot! =)


  15. Sewinkel says:

    Superb! After my heart breaking a little that C&A have to be apart in chap 32, this made me smile to think about all the good you have coming up for us in future chapters. I now reread your story over and over, instead of FSOG, FSD, and FSF 🙂


  16. grublue says:

    You’re distracting me from work that has to be done… Awesome one-shot, very hot!!


  17. Deborah says:

    Well, shit! That was hot, hot, and add some butter make it melt hot! I needed that today, thanks for the distraction….now my panties are soaked….God, I have to pounce on my husband now…


  18. HenryCavill4Fifty says:

    That’s a quickie?? I need a Meander-type quickie!


  19. 1klkelly says:

    I need a cigarette, and I don’t smoke. ;-}


  20. Amy says:

    What a hot treat that was:)..you never disappoint!!


  21. hisboo13 says:

    loved it i was over here rooting for them ! lol 🙂


  22. moire says:

    STREUTH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Somehow the cup of tea isn’t cutting the mustard 😉 LOVE IT!!!!!


  23. Ucbear says:

    Wow. That was steaming hot! You are a fantastic writer!


  24. Barb says:

    Love, love, love. Thank you.


  25. tracy5678 says:

    You made a lot of people smile today…among other things… Quickies and surprises, keep them coming!!! ; )


  26. Chantel says:

    Some of these comments are funny;). Sexy little fantasy. Your husband must love you thinking about these scenes all the time…,lol


  27. Heather B says:

    hmmm you asked what was our favorite scene awhile back…perhaps ummm this!?


  28. kerry says:

    wow This is seriously hot need my man to read this shame he’s working tonight Grr


  29. Gwen says:

    Hoy hot hot hot hot hot ….


  30. Sheila Hall says:

    Loved this chapter/quickie I do not know if it is hot around here or I am having a hot flush ;)……Best start reading the chapter again, just to make sure. Thanks Monique for another brilliant chapter.


  31. cfwright2013 says:

    Holy shit, that was good for me!


  32. Diana says:

    MONIQUE………When you give us a special one shot story, you sure know how to make it HOT as ever!!!! You also know how to make your readers feel a part of the story & envy Ana…..&….Christian depending if the reader is a male or female!!!! OMG!!!! TY TY TY
    Always a treat my friend………


  33. Diana says:

    HOT…HOT…HOT….What a sweet treat……the t-shirt got me even prior to getting in the shower!!!! Then when he said, ““I hope you didn’t think you were in charge Mrs Grey. I say when, I say how.” Loved it…thanks Monique :+)

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  34. Samara S. says:

    Can I have one??? LOL
    NO,I’ll take two….. Lol 😉


  35. Anita knowles says:

    Ahhhhh….that’s sum Hot Tamales sista!!perfect to finish off my week!!!
    Thank you yet again wonderful Monique !!!


  36. angie says:

    Wow! That was hot.


  37. EvieHammond says:

    I can’t help but wonder what would have happened if she’d said, “Don’t you dare touch me.” 😉 Maybe in that kind of situation he’d like a little conquest, a little resistance to overcome — since he’s into “I say when, I say where” mode. Have I piqued your interest for another chapter? 🙂


  38. Liz says:

    I absolutely love your writing!!!! Dying for more !!!! *just don’t kill off someone important *i’ll cry*


  39. Debbie martinez says:



  40. gabyaveledo says:

    Really Monique, my husband seriuslly regretted that he sido I could tie him up last night… your writting has me scattered all over! Taking my imagination to some really dark places (also really fun and kinky) for hubbie and me! STILL WAITING FOR THE LAST EPISODE OF MEANDER! PLEASE PUT US OUT OF THIS MISERY GIRL!!!!


  41. gmbizette says:

    Yep read again still HOT HOT HOT 😉


  42. funkymamma51 says:

    Phew I need a shower myself after reading that!!


  43. crystal says:

    I’ve read this several times, but still takes my breath each time. Please give us some more one shot stories!!


  44. Kimberley chatman says:

    Love it more PLEASE


  45. mileydi morales says:

    Woah! That was effing hot. Please, please don’ttop writting. When will you finish the epiloge for meander?? I hope soon pleeeease.

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  46. mothergolf says:

    well, you did it again….amazing……is it hot in here? Think Ill take a shower now……loved it….


  47. Penny chrisawn says:

    I love your stories. I am always looking forward to the next one. Thanks for writing them.


  48. KC Hudson says:

    I just finished reading your entire blog and all 70+ chapters. I began reading Fifty Shades by EL James recently and I must admit, the writing was awful. I loved the story idea, but struggled to read the book. Then I found your blog here online and absolutely fell in love! You’re book is utterly amazing and had me up late some nights unable to put it down. I have a book series coming out next year and I hope it captivates audiences in the same way your writing did for me.
    Please keep writing. You’re gifted and it shouldn’t go to waste!


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